The thing that shocked me the most was that this faux pas was coming from YOU of all people. Someone who I know for a fact does their research and checks things out to make them plausible to the most believable point considering cannon and facts gathered to reach a very believable story.
Also you may want to investigate finding a real beta. I can't help but notice you have been making more and more small mistakes. I know that you have been doing your own beta work (and you've been doing an overall good job) but more things seem to be falling through the cracks. Things that you wouldn't pick up on because you see what you think you wrote not what actually came out of your fingers (ie- of instead of off and such like that). Or if you don't want to try finding a beta maybe try reading your stuff backwards (starting at the end and working your way to the start to find mistakes).
(these were *slightly* edited to fit within the comment limitations that LJ puts on people ;))
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Re: grammar gripes
Date: 2011-10-31 02:44 am (UTC)Also you may want to investigate finding a real beta. I can't help but notice you have been making more and more small mistakes. I know that you have been doing your own beta work (and you've been doing an overall good job) but more things seem to be falling through the cracks. Things that you wouldn't pick up on because you see what you think you wrote not what actually came out of your fingers (ie- of instead of off and such like that). Or if you don't want to try finding a beta maybe try reading your stuff backwards (starting at the end and working your way to the start to find mistakes).
(these were *slightly* edited to fit within the comment limitations that LJ puts on people ;))