That doesn't seem that harsh at all. Without reading the story, I can still tell you've made valid points. It's always disconcerting when someone gets pulled out of the ICU and goes 'on the lam'. Uh-uh.
People say they want concrit, but I think the word they're looking for is adoration.
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Re: grammar gripes
Date: 2011-10-31 07:42 am (UTC)People say they want concrit, but I think the word they're looking for is adoration.